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Bakura looked at the palace in the distance and sighed. He hated having no money ... he had to steal things from the market in order to survive whilst the people in the palace got to laze around on their butts all day whilst their servants brought them anything they wanted. He was forced to live in a cavern that overlooked the whole town. It wasn't much, but it was where he lived. He was lonely as well, but that was a good thing in his eyes. He never got on well with other people ... it would be better if he was by himself. Solitude was beginning to bother him though ... he wished he had someone to talk to. He looked up and watched the sunset, sighing angrily. He swore under his breath
I'm starving ... maybe one more trip to the market wouldn't hurt ... but if the guards catch me, I'm dead. I'd better do it tomorrow ... the morning rush will hide my crime He thought

-Meanwhile-

Princess (Name) was wondering around the palace gardens. She was tired of the palace life. It was so ... restrictive. People told her where to go, how to dress, who to talk to ... and what was worse, her father, the Pharaoh was trying to get her to chose someone to marry. But she didn't want to marry any of the princes he found for her. She wanted to marry someone she loved with all her heart. But no matter what she said, the Pharaoh wouldn't listen. He was just as stubborn as he was wise. She had half a mind to run away ... because the palace life was really getting to her
Why can't I just be like other girls? You thought, sighing
She looked at the sun setting in the distance
If only ... I could be free, even just for a day ... I know! I'll sneak out tomorrow ... I just want to spend one day out of the palace She thought, smiling
"(Name)? (Name)!"
"Yes father?" She called
"Come here"
She sighed and went into the palace, to the throne room where the Pharaoh was sitting
"Yes, father?" She asked in a monotone voice
"Don't take that tone with me, young lady" He said, sitting up properly
She sighed angrily
"But father, I-"
"(Name), you need to choose a husband soon. Or I shall have to choose for you" He said angrily
"Please, father I-"
"I mean it" He growled, standing up
(Name) sighed and he walked up to her, giving her a hug
"I care about your future, (Name)" He said
If he really cared about me, he wouldn't be forcing me to choose a husband out of all these spoilt brats She thought, sighing

To be Continued
A request from :iconlibralizard:. They asked me to do an Aladdin themed insert, so ... here goes nothing! This is probably going to be a long series, who knows ...

Note Arabian Nights (One Thousand and One Nights) was where Aladdin originally came from

:iconpolandplz: :iconsaysplz: Yeah, the Pharaoh is so totally your dad in this story

Sorry it's so short ... and sorry if the characters are OoC ... I haven't watched the show in a long time

Part 1 - You are Here
Part 2 - [link]
Part 3 - [link]
Part 4 - [link]
Part 5 - [link]
Part 6 - [link]
Part 7 - [link]
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lordicute Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Seto Kaiba Fabulous 
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Valenntine2000 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it so far and I love how you entered Bkakure he has a nice entry about smart ways to steal wich sounds like OUR Fangirls Bakura! I like how he still has that certain attitude too it is very nice. You good at Bakura!
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ShirleyTemple98 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
Oh My God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU MAKE ATEM MY FLIPPEN FATHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
o.o
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Alice-cry11 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
ohhh no you did NOT Just. OMG i have..... OMG Agreed with Shirley temple here. that was just worng so evil. but im still going to read it XD
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Jaquiekuro14 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Student Artist
is great! so its like aladdin, fine by me!
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CordeliaChan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So it's like aladdin?
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah, I'm not too pleased with how this one came out, to be honest
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CordeliaChan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconlunashrugplz: could re rewrite some parts
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GaMzEeLoVeR1 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Artist
i love yami bakura SO much <3
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