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Crona looked at you from the other end of the classroom. He had been admiring you from afar for a long time. He thought you were smart, funny ... kind, helpful ... and pretty. He had tried to talk to you several times, but one of his friends always turned up and made him feel too nervous. He sighed and looked at the blank page that was his test paper
"Do something, dumbass!" Ragnarok hissed
"I will ... just let me think" Crona mumbled, looking at you again
Ragnarok hit Crona hard. Surprisingly, he didn't make a sound. Ragnarok hit him again and still nothing. Crona was completely bewitched by you ... a little blush appeared on his cheeks and smiled. Class ended and he only noticed when he saw you leave the room. He hurried after you, calling your name. You turned around and smiled, waiting for him to catch up with you
"Hey, Crona!" You said, smiling
The blush on his cheeks intensified
I'm no good with girls ... they make me nervous ... He thought, rubbing his arms
"H-hi, (N-Name). H-how are y-you t-today?" He asked, smiling
"I'm alright. Hey, are you ok? You seem nervous" You said
"Y-yeah! I'm f-fine!" Crona said, giving an uneasy chuckle
"Are you sure? I worry about you sometimes, Crona" You said, patting him on the back
Ragnarok hit you hard
"Back off! The only one who can hit him is me!" He said angrily
"Hey, don't hit her!" Crona shouted, alarmed
You looked at him with surprise
"Yeah?" Crona mumbled, shifting uncomfortably
"You're cute!" You giggled, blushing
He smiled
"R-really?" He mumbled, looking away
"Yeah! How about we hang out sometime, just the two of us?" You suggested, smiling
"W-wow ... you really want to spend time with me?" He asked, surprised
"She doesn't like you, pinko! The only thing you're good for is being a punching bag!" Ragnarok scoffed
Crona felt like crying. Ragnarok always did that ... ruining his conversations with you. Crona loved you ... and Ragnarok kept ruining his chance with you ...
"Well ... I do like you, Crona. And I'd love nothing more than to hang out with you" You said
Crona's heart almost stopped. His whole face went dark red
"I'll see you later, ok Crona?" You said, smiling
"Y-yeah!" He said, suppressing the urge to cheer
He felt like he wanted to stand on the roof and yell to the world that someone liked him ... but he wouldn't know how to deal with the height he would be at if he actually tried it. He watched you go with a smile and returned to his room, curling up in the corner as usual
"I don't know how to deal with this ... I asked Stein about it, but he told me I was in love, but what is that exactly? I don't understand" He mumbled to himself
"Forget it, Pinko ... it's not important" Ragnarok said
Is it this warm feeling when I think about (Name)? ... Is it the butterflies in my stomach when I talk to her? Crona thought
He pondered it for hours, but couldn't come to a conclusion. He was in love with you ... but he didn't understand what it meant ...

The End
I am fully aware of the fact that Crona is a girl in the manga. However, in the anime, Crona is a boy, so in this insert he is too

I found the picture on google!
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dreamingemochick Apr 11, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmnrthumbsupplz: :iconmnrthumbsupplz: wow... you are a very talented writer
awesome!!!!! please make another part
starfire-the-cat Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This story so sweet. I think I can handle it. :)
SwiftNinja91 Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
starfire-the-cat Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Make another part it was so aborable
I love crona so much he's so cute!!!!Bunny Emoji-42 (Awww) [V2]
Me to I just want to give him a big hug
OliviaPhantomhive Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I don't get why people say: "Crona is a girl in the manga!" Because I read the manga, Crona is a boy there (in the manga) too. Yea, Patty asks if he is a boy or girl, but that happens in the anime too. Crona isn't a girl, anywhere. People will also say: "Crona's gender isn't clear." Yes it is, Crona is a boy. Oh my gosh. Oh, not being rude to you or anything, but it sounded like you haven't read the manga. So I just thought I'd tell you. Cute story, I loved it!
SwiftNinja91 Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sorry, I get confused because the creator doesn't even know XD
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