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Crona looked at you from the other end of the classroom. He had been admiring you from afar for a long time. He thought you were smart, funny ... kind, helpful ... and pretty. He had tried to talk to you several times, but one of his friends always turned up and made him feel too nervous. He sighed and looked at the blank page that was his test paper
"Do something, dumbass!" Ragnarok hissed
"I will ... just let me think" Crona mumbled, looking at you again
Ragnarok hit Crona hard. Surprisingly, he didn't make a sound. Ragnarok hit him again and still nothing. Crona was completely bewitched by you ... a little blush appeared on his cheeks and smiled. Class ended and he only noticed when he saw you leave the room. He hurried after you, calling your name. You turned around and smiled, waiting for him to catch up with you
"Hey, Crona!" You said, smiling
The blush on his cheeks intensified
I'm no good with girls ... they make me nervous ... He thought, rubbing his arms
"H-hi, (N-Name). H-how are y-you t-today?" He asked, smiling
"I'm alright. Hey, are you ok? You seem nervous" You said
"Y-yeah! I'm f-fine!" Crona said, giving an uneasy chuckle
"Are you sure? I worry about you sometimes, Crona" You said, patting him on the back
Ragnarok hit you hard
"Back off! The only one who can hit him is me!" He said angrily
"Hey, don't hit her!" Crona shouted, alarmed
You looked at him with surprise
"C-Crona?"
"Yeah?" Crona mumbled, shifting uncomfortably
"You're cute!" You giggled, blushing
He smiled
"R-really?" He mumbled, looking away
"Yeah! How about we hang out sometime, just the two of us?" You suggested, smiling
"W-wow ... you really want to spend time with me?" He asked, surprised
"She doesn't like you, pinko! The only thing you're good for is being a punching bag!" Ragnarok scoffed
Crona felt like crying. Ragnarok always did that ... ruining his conversations with you. Crona loved you ... and Ragnarok kept ruining his chance with you ...
"Well ... I do like you, Crona. And I'd love nothing more than to hang out with you" You said
Crona's heart almost stopped. His whole face went dark red
"I'll see you later, ok Crona?" You said, smiling
"Y-yeah!" He said, suppressing the urge to cheer
He felt like he wanted to stand on the roof and yell to the world that someone liked him ... but he wouldn't know how to deal with the height he would be at if he actually tried it. He watched you go with a smile and returned to his room, curling up in the corner as usual
"I don't know how to deal with this ... I asked Stein about it, but he told me I was in love, but what is that exactly? I don't understand" He mumbled to himself
"Forget it, Pinko ... it's not important" Ragnarok said
Is it this warm feeling when I think about (Name)? ... Is it the butterflies in my stomach when I talk to her? Crona thought
He pondered it for hours, but couldn't come to a conclusion. He was in love with you ... but he didn't understand what it meant ...

The End
I am fully aware of the fact that Crona is a girl in the manga. However, in the anime, Crona is a boy, so in this insert he is too

I found the picture on google!
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souleater65 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I luv it soo kawaii :3
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anniebananaberry Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014
I just love Crona so much. CRONA IS MY PRECIOUS. MY PRECIOUSSSSS XD
Also, fun fact: My friends pushed me to make a few OCs for Hetalia and Soul Eater and while I was making my SE OC I decided she was pansexual... (Don't ask I was trying something new) welllllll my friends started freaking out because pansexual = attracted to all genders 
Crona doesn't have a confirmed gender.
OBVIOUSLY we have to ship them together now because it doesn't matter >~<
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bellamegalodonna Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just imagine Crona as both genders
During lemons: so does your dick grow out of your vagina or
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=_=
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KirahIsCool Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
OMG :D! and i think in the manga he is both.... im not sure, he... or she... But seriosly... crona is the only one i am still trying to figure out the gender
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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KirahIsCool Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
when i first saw him in the anime i was like "Wow.... that is a cool looking gir---- WAIT HE IS A BOY!?
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Same here. I totally thought he was a girl
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KirahIsCool Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
XD Crona: the only one who i still think is a girl (i thought black*star was a girl :P
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol
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Angelsnowywolf8 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Student Writer
This is fantastic. *smiles*
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MichyChan10 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
That was the cutest thing ever!!!!!!!!!!! :iconyay2penglandplz:
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DualBlades Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Crona  Chibi Crona, you are too cute!
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Tori-The-Miester Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Filmographer
Chrona Icon - I-I-I l-l-love y-y-you t-t-to....
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Tori-The-Miester Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Filmographer
HOLY CRAP! CROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONA! I WUV YOU! Crona  Chibi 
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candyMorphan26 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student Writer
Crona reminds me of BMO..... Don't judge me, it's because he/she is genderless
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DashieLuvsGaming Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Student Artist
TRUE! Bmo Icon Crona  Chibi 
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dreamingemochick Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmnrthumbsupplz: :iconmnrthumbsupplz: wow... you are a very talented writer
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Sammy2312 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
awesome!!!!! please make another part
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starfire-the-cat Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This story so sweet. I think I can handle it. :)
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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starfire-the-cat Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
~(^-^U)~
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Sammy2312 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
Make another part it was so aborable
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Deimos-shinigami Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
I love crona so much he's so cute!!!!Bunny Emoji-42 (Awww) [V2]
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Sammy2312 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Me to I just want to give him a big hug
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OliviaPhantomhive Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I don't get why people say: "Crona is a girl in the manga!" Because I read the manga, Crona is a boy there (in the manga) too. Yea, Patty asks if he is a boy or girl, but that happens in the anime too. Crona isn't a girl, anywhere. People will also say: "Crona's gender isn't clear." Yes it is, Crona is a boy. Oh my gosh. Oh, not being rude to you or anything, but it sounded like you haven't read the manga. So I just thought I'd tell you. Cute story, I loved it!
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sorry, I get confused because the creator doesn't even know XD
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OliviaPhantomhive Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I know! It's funny how the person who created Crona doesn't even know what he is! XD
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ShadowxScarlet109 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
The creator actually said that crona was originally intended to be a girl, but was changed to a male at the last moment
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jkdiroe Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
For shame Ragnarok. Leave Crona alone. *hugs Crona* I'll protect you.
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*hug*
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CannibalisticChaos Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
Crona is my baby.... Why you no marry me Crona....? Crona  Chibi 
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Senator-Meowmix Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
d'aaaawww
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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victoriasecret1998 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dsjakjdhjfhldijhdlshdvbsljh my feelings just nope oh my gosh so many like fangirling *dies*
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Deaththegirl-334 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Love it so cute!
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^_^
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Inugirl115 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
He's just soooo cute
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seerofheros Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Me: crona I'm not makin fun of ya but *starts rotf loling*

My oc Luna: *face palms at me* Crona love is...f\_/ck how do I explain this?
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madster111 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it its in my faves now
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^_^
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LaylaAlvedo Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
I like Crona,he's nice.^^
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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LaylaAlvedo Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
And has some good lines.^^
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah ... I really feel bad for him
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LaylaAlvedo Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Me too. I cried when he sacraficed himself for Maka...
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah. I screamed "NO!" when I saw that scene for the first time
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LaylaAlvedo Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
It made me cry more then the Hetalia Revolutionary War scene.
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow ...
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musicalMayham Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
vhsdljrkfghserljghdrkgjaerljghrldjghrsjlghzd/jghzdlgjknzseh yes
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