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"U-uh ... Become one, da?" Ivan said nervously
The girl he was talking to walked away, looking agitated. He went back to his friends, who were leaning against the wall and had seen what had happened
"You botched it again?!" Arthur said, folding his arms
"At this rate, you'll become the guy in the school with the most rejections" America said
"Oui, even more than that loser from Canada" Francis laughed
"Francis, that's our friend Matthew, aru" Yao sighed
"He's still a loser" Francis muttered
"Alright, let's get back to the job in hand ... getting Ivan a girl so his crazy sister will leave him be" Arthur said
"Sh-she's not crazy. She's just ... eccentric" Ivan said, a little embarrassed
He was always a little defensive when it came to his family, but he couldn't deny that his younger sister Natalia was a little messed up in the head. He had gone to his friends for help, hoping they could teach him how to get a girl to like him ... one that wasn't his crazy sister. But he always ended up panicking and messing the whole thing up
"Come on, it's fairly simple. Don't let nerves get the best of you" Arthur said
"Easy for you to say ... you and Alfred could easily get a girl. You're ... normal" Ivan mumbled, looking down
"Oh come, now ... if Yao can get a girl, you can" Francis said
"Hey, that's not nice, aru!" Yao said, scowling
"Anyway, back to the subject at hand ..." Arthur growled, trying to get the conversation back on track
Everyone else fell silent as Ivan began to wonder if asking his friends for advice was a good idea after all. He let out a small sigh and thought that maybe he would do better if he wasn't under so much pressure. Maybe it was the fact that he was conscious of his friends watching that made him panic?
"Ivan? ... Ivan!"
Ivan snapped out of his trail of thought and looked at his friends, surprised that his mind had wondered off mid-conversation. Although ... it was nice to forget about the real world, if only just for a moment. He was starting to think he would never find someone ... his nose was huge and he was a lot taller than most, making him appear intimidating or even scary
"Come on, snap out of it dude" Alfred said
"We need to focus" Arthur sighed
"Maybe I should just crawl into a hole and die alone somewhere" Ivan muttered
"That works, too!" Alfred said
Yao smacked him around the head, shouting at him in Chinese. Ivan sighed, and looked around the room. Then, something caught his eye ... a [age] year old girl was leaning against the wall further along the hallway, reading. He felt his heart skip a beat and his cheeks flush red ...

"I-it's her" He breathed
"Her?" The other boys asked, confused
"It's [Name]! Th-the most beautiful person in the school" Ivan said, fidgeting
"Oh, please. Everyone knows I'm the most beautiful" Francis said in an arrogant fashion
"You keep telling yourself that, Rapunzel" Arthur muttered
"Are you sure you want to ask [Name] out? She's turned down every guy who's asked her ... hey, she even turned Gilbert Beilschmidt down and he's the chick magnet" Alfred said
"I'd prefer you didn't call women baby chickens. Also, stay away from my sisters aru" Yao said, sighing
Ivan took a deep breath and walked over to [Name] fidgeting a little
"U-um ... привет!" He said, very nervous
She looked up from her book
"What?" She asked with a quizzical look on her face
"O-oh, i-it's Russian. "привет" means "hello". Sorry for the confusion" He said, fidgeting
"I see ... are you Russian, then?" She asked
"D-da. I moved here from Moscow about five years ago" He said with a nervous smile
"Wow, sounds interesting! I must say, your English is very good" She said
"Th-thank you. Um ... my name is Ivan, by the way" He said, fidgeting
"Nice to meet you. I'm [Name]" She said with a sweet smile
"O-oh, I know! Y-you're prettiest girl in the school!" He mumbled
"Thank you" [Name] said, blushing
Ivan felt very much under a lot of pressure knowing that his friends were watching and his nerves were starting to get the best of him
"I was ... w-wondering if ... m-maybe ... you would like to go out with me?" He said, shaking a little
[Name] smiled
"Sure, I'll give you a chance" She said
"Great! S-so, uh ... how about we meet up here at lunch?" He asked
"Sure. We can figure out what to do from there" She replied, smiling
"G-Great, so I'll see you then?" He asked, blushing a little
"See you then" She said, walking away
Ivan's heart leapt for joy and looked at his friends, who were looking at him with expressions of surprise
"Bloody hell. He actually did it" Arthur said, surprised
"Aiya, I can't believe she said yes, aru!" Yao said, laughing a little
"I can't believe it's not butter!" Alfred piped up
Yao smacked him around the head and Ivan laughed. He could hardly believe that [Name] had agreed to spend time with him, either. He looked at his friends, who had proceeded to start arguing about who was responsible for the whole thing. Ivan was just grateful that the others were there to support him and taught him not to give up
"Thank you, Guys" He said with a smile
"No problem!" The others said in unison
Once again, they began to fight and Ivan sighed. How those four managed to get girls to like them was a big mystery to him ...

The End
This is a One-Shot

Russia tries to overcome his shyness with the help of his chums ... which yields surprising results
It's not my best work, I know ... but it's been ages since I submitted stuff and I'm running out of ideas for One-Shots

Hetalia (c) Hidekazu Himaruya
Story (c) Me, SwiftNinja91
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8Otakugirl8 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
America: I can't believe it's not butter!
me: *dies of laughter*
my sister: *stares with a confused look*
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badassgermanchick Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That was just to great ! This was so cute and I died laughing when America said , "I can't believe it's not butter !!"
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Miss-Inuyasha Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Alfred-"I cant believe its not butter!" 
Me-walks up to Alfred(smacks him square in the face with a book)
everyone else-(snicker)
Me-Who else wants to get facebooked
All-(get quiet)
Me-I thought so
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abey9 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
I get facebooked all the time! :) Hahaha!
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Miss-Inuyasha Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol
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bluewolf165 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Russia is so cute and America is an idiot
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IS831fan9 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:icongermanyfacepalmplz:

"i cant believe its not butter!"

.....






:iconfacepalmplz:








:icondoublefacepalmplz:







SERIOUSLY?!
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner May 7, 2014   General Artist
"I can't believe it's not butter!"
:icongermanyfacepalmplz: You sad excuse for a nation...
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Nightcoregirl101 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
" I can't believe it's butter!"

*sighs and throws a book at his face* =3= You just got facebook'ed, believe it.


other words; Awesome story!~
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PickleQueenOfNinjas Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
It's a mystery to me too...
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KiraXHetaliaLover Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Lol Omg I laughed so freakin hard I can't believe its not butter xD
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HetalianSunflower Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't believe it's not butter... America! *slaps*

Aaanyway... I lurve your profile pic. Magic Trio~! *fangirl squeal*
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD GydroZMaa made it
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HetalianSunflower Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Romania, Norway, and England... So perfect... :iconfrenchsquealplz:
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:iconswiftninja91:
SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:giggle:
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HetalianSunflower Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Magical... They're so magical. *stares in wonder*
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bloodrace101 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I can't believe its not butter omg I died
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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HetalianSunflower Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
America: "I can't believe it's not butter!"

Me: *frowns at him*

Babylon: *beats him over the head 4 times with a shovel* You-*thunk*-are-*thunk*-so-*thunk*-STUPID!*thunk*

America: *rubs his head* Ow... Sorry...

Babylon: *glares* You should be.

Me: *backs away with my hands up in surrender*
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anime-otaku28 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it! So cute ^~^
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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Russia-addict-117 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student General Artist
FWAHH BUTTERFLIES!!! I think I've gone insane, but if anyone asks.... RUSSIA IS MINE!!
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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14352 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist

"I'd prefer you didn't call women baby chickens..." XDXDXD WTF YAO!!!?!

 

omg that was just amazing!

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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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FlutterShy2232 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD Alfred can't believe it's not butter
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Quite XD
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KitKatNYA13 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
"I can't believe it's not butter!" Very cheesy Alfred, funny, but cheesy. N thank u Yao for pwning Alfred. Luv this.
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Pantelda Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Student General Artist
I believe you meant 'buttery ' :icontrollfaceplz:  * runs away laughing * 
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KitKatNYA13 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
U TROLL! :iconnotamusedplz:
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Pantelda Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Sorry~ 

(kinda my fist time trolling someone ) 
*laughs evilly*
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KitKatNYA13 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
It's a good thing. N it's my 1008th time. *demented insane laughter* 
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Pantelda Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Student General Artist
O.o .... Wow that's great to see there's people that are as insane as me ~ * twirls on spot while laughing maniacally*
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KitKatNYA13 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Actually, u have me, my sisters (triplets) n then my sisters best friends. N ya, insanity connects ppl. 
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Pantelda Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student General Artist
* derps and sits down  * yeahhhhhh it does.... All my friends are insane, but it's awseome * suddenly jumps up and twirls away * i shall go my pepole need meeeeeeeeee ~
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IvansGurl16 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
"I can't believe it's not butter!" Lol Alfred!! XD
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AnimalGirl7 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
i'd smack him!
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IvansGurl16 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
I agree...if I could stop laughing first.
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AnimalGirl7 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
i know...
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^.^
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zevranarainai1 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
lol I love Yao and how he's so defensive of others.
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah XD
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neigma Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student General Artist
I like seeing a nervous Ivan! So cute!
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^_^
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neigma Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student General Artist
I think it would be cool to turn this into a comic, execpt not an x reader. Maybe with Chun Yan (fem!china) as the love interest... if i could actually draw... *shot*
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sounds good, actually :D
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neigma Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student General Artist
^J^ kolkolkolkol
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109144 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gosh...O\\\O I DON'T EVER GET CONFESSED TO THOUGH!!.\\\\. Well, it's a story, so ja, I don't mind.>w<

The moment Francis said:

"Oh, please. Everyone knows I'm the most beautiful"

I was coughing like crazy. Yeah, I've coughing, but not this badly. *glares at France*
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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NyanCat001 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
"Bloody hell. He actually did it" Arthur said, surprised
"Aiya, I can't believe she said yes, aru!" Yao said, laughing a little.
"I can't believe it's not butter!" Alfred piped up.
Alright, where's Fabio?!? XDD :iconfabioplz:
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