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Itachi waited in a restaurant for Shisui, because he had set up a blind date for him. Itachi was just hoping that it wasn't anyone annoying ... a look of pure surprise appeared on his face when Shizako came into view, blushing fiercely. He stood up as she came over to his table
"Itachi ..." She breathed
"What are you doing here?" He asked, confused
"H-huh? Shisui told me you wanted to go on a date with me" She said
He frowned and sighed
"Honestly, one of these days ... I am going to kill him ..." He said
She giggled
"Oh well ... I guess I can deal with this. At least it's with someone I know and respect" He said, sitting down again
"You ... respect me?" She asked, joining him
"Of course I do. You're a fellow Leaf Shinobi ... but you're also one of my dearest friends" He said, smiling
"And I love you ..." He thought
"Th-that's so sweet!" She breathed, placing her hands over her heart
She noticed his facial expression change and she tilted her head to one side
"Is ... something wrong, Itachi?" She asked
"N-no ... it's nothing ..." He mumbled, looking away
"I am such a bad liar ... I'm going to have to work on that" He thought to himself angrily
"Itachi, you seem distracted ... are you sure you're alright?" She asked
"A-actually, Sasuke has a cold at the moment. I'm worried" He replied
"Aww ... little Sasuke. Well, you tell him I said "Get Well Soon", won't you?" She said
"Y-yeah ..." He said, blushing
"How is he by the way?" She asked
"He's growing up fast ... Father is trying to teach him the fireball technique" He replied
"Isn't he a little ... young for that?" She asked
"That's what I said, but ... if they think he's ready, then there's no harm, right?" He said
Shizako sighed
"Still ... he's only young" She said
"I'm aware of that. But he surprises you" Itachi said, smiling


Itachi was walking Shizako home, blushing a deep shade of red and his heart racing. The more he tried to ignore it, the louder his heartbeats seemed to become. They reached the front door of her home and they looked at each other as they stood in the doorway
"Thank you, Itachi ... that was a wonderful evening" She said, smiling
"Shizako ... I'm glad my blind date was you" He said, blushing
She smirked at him. It was a good thing he explained things to her before he said that, or she could have gotten upset
"Good night, Itachi" She said, smiling
He stroked her cheek, which turned bright red
"Good night, Shizako ..." He said
He leaned forward slowly ...
"This is it ... I'm going to kiss her ... please don't miss!" He thought desperately
His eyes closed half way and to his surprise, she shut her eyes completely. Their lips were mere inches from each other
"Yo, Itachi!"
Itachi straightened up and Shizako's eyes snapped open as Shisui appeared
"Hey guys!" He said, smiling
"Shisui!" Itachi shouted, going a very dark red
"Uh-oh!" Shisui squeaked, running away
Itachi chased after him
"One of these days, I swear ... I am going to kill you!" He shouted, coming to a halt
He looked back at Shizako. She was laughing
"Oh, those boys ..." She said, sighing
He watched her go inside and he folded his arms
"Oh well ... better luck next time ..." He sighed
"I had better pick up some cough medicine for Sasuke while I'm here" He thought, wondering off into the night

The End
A commission for :iconbrittnara:. It features her OC, Shizako

Shisui sets up a first date, and things go far better than expected
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UchihaSeira Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awwww.....that lucky girl! lol cute story! :)
SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Shuro2009 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
I especially love the "please don't miss" bit XD
SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe ^_^
Ninja-Burito Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This was great XD
Really sweet
I loved it nwn
SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ninja-Burito Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
daniellejr1998 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Student General Artist
It's great! i loved it! another idea if you needed one could be a sasuke x reader x itachi ?
but only if you want to.
but it was still Awesome !

SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you
monkchoo24 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice job!
As always of course!
SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
cute.. :)
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