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You heard a knock at your door and you blushed. You answered the door with a smile. Death the Kid was standing there, smiling sweetly. He suddenly frowned and tidied your fringe. You giggled as he folded his arms and inspected you carefully. You just let him do it ... you didn't want to ruin the one day you had Kid all to yourself. But when he poked your breasts you decided enough was enough
"A-are you ready to go? Because I am" You said, smiling
He nodded and gave a smile, indicating that he was done with his somewhat creepy inspection. You had made sure that your outfit was symmetrical, just so he wouldn't freak out during your date ... he asked you out a little while ago, but the two of you could never find a day that suited both of you, until this day ... you couldn't believe it was actually happening! You had been in love with him for a long time ... and you very rarely got this close to him without Black Star prying you two apart again or completely ruining the moment. You had almost kissed Kid several times, but each time, Black Star came and stopped you ... it was like he was on a mission to stop you and Kid being together. You were just praying that Black Star would stay away today ... this day was important to you
"So ... where should we go?" You asked
"I booked us a table at a restaurant not far from here ..." He said, leading you away
You happily walked with him and you blushed. He had actually planned something romantic ... this certainly wasn't what you were expecting. Suddenly, he began to hum "Greensleeves" and you felt a blush rise to your cheeks. He seemed to notice this and looked at you, full of concern
"Is ... something wrong?" He asked
"N-no, I'm fine" You breathed, a little embarrassed
He eyed you suspiciously with those golden yellow eyes of his and smiled
"Alright ... if you ever feel uncomfortable with anything, just let me know" He said

-Several Hours Later-

You were heading home, hand in hand with Kid. You had just had the most romantic dinner with him at the most expensive restaurant in Death City
"Oh, Kid ... tonight was wonderful" You said as you stood on your porch
"Maybe ... we can get together again sometime" He said, smiling
"I'd like that" You said, fidgeting
"(Name)?"
"Yes?"
He held you close ... and kissed you, sending a shiver up your spine
"I love you" He said, blushing
You stared at him, scarcely believing he was saying it. You smiled and hugged him tightly, kissing him. He let out a muffled yelp and after a while, kissed back. It was absolute bliss ... your first kiss ... was with Lord Death's son ... and for once, Black Star or Soul weren't there to ruin it. You could enjoy your first kiss in peace ... you broke away, both of you going dark red
"I love you, too ..." You said as he played with your hair
He smiled and freed you from his hug and you did the same
"So ... I'll see you around?" He said
"Yeah ..." You breathed
"Just one last thing ... could you go to your bedroom window, you know the one with the balcony? I want to do one last thing for you" He said
You giggled and obeyed. You stood on the balcony, smiling
"Ok, what now?" You asked
He began to sing, which shocked you. You blushed and began to giggle. You never expected someone like him to serenade you ...
"Alas my love you do me wrong ... To cast me off discourteously; And I have loved you oh so long. Delighting in your company" He sang
You smiled
"Oh, Kid ..." You breathed, placing your hand over your racing heart
"Greensleeves was my delight, Greensleeves my heart of gold ... Greensleeves was my heart of joy ... And who but my Lady Greensleeves" He sang
Suddenly, Black Star jumped out of the bushes
"YAHOO!" He cried
"You idiot! That was supposed to be flawless!" Kid shouted
"Whatever, it was way too mushy for my tastes" Black Star said smugly
"You ruined it, you Bastard!" Kid said, with a look of death in his eye
"Uh-oh!" Black Star squeaked, running off
"GET BACK HERE!" Kid shouted, chasing after him
You giggled as you watched the one you loved go
"Oh, Kid ..." You mumbled, blushing

The End
A Commission for :iconemopunk68:

Kid goes on a date with you ... and a certain someone seems to be trying to ruin it

Song Used -
Greensleeves

Greensleeves is an absolutely beautiful piece of music that I was listening to whilst writing this ... here' s a link to it (no lyrics, sorry!) -> [link]
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:iconangllannakurayami:
AngllannaKurayami Featured By Owner May 30, 2015  New Deviant
WHAT THE F**K BLACK STAR!!!! *throws a shoe at his head* HEADSHOT!!!!!!
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YumeSenkai Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Black Star you bitch
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MetalBladez00940902 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015
((OMFG LOLOLOL MY BROTHER SINGS THAT SONG OFTEN AND I PLAY IT ON THE KEYBOARD!!! *is currently LMAO*))
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SoKawaiSoOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I bet you have that song in your head dont chu? ;3
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elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Edited Dec 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Me in real life:black*star you better start running or ima use mah china
black*star:HAHAHAHH-
me:CHINA I CHOOSE YOU!APH Neko China APH Nyo China China (Intro) [V6] APH China Omnomnom Hetalia Spinning China Aru Icon China (Explaining) [V2] China (Happy) [V3] use kick!
china:*mmd kick* (watch this u will get it www.youtube.com/watch?v=XM_b_Q… you have to watch all of it the part where china says "IMA USE MY KUNG-FO KICK!")
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SoKawaiSoOtaku Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'd be too lazy to chase him ^^
I'd just Maka-Chop him the next day at school. Then give him a jar of that Soul sucking water stuff xD
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45GunsAndaRope Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Dangit Black Star!! Ninja dropkick!
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Tori-The-Miester Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Filmographer
Insane Laughter Little Leo Yami Bakura evil laughter :hichigo: 
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Tori-The-Miester Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Student Filmographer
*holding a katana* Prepare to die Black Star! *starts chasing him*
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AzureFox20 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
(chases blackstar with a battle axe) quit ruining people's romantic moments you baka!!!
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INSANITY1238 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just listened to the song(Nolwenn Leroy - Greensleeves + Lyrics (Paroles) - youtube) I loved it
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otakudreams139 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
BLACKSTAR YOU LITTLE *runs over to blackstar and start beating him*
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*watches you run after him*
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EeveeGamerGirl Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
-Hits black star with hammer-
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
o.o
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EeveeGamerGirl Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Elly:JUSTICE!
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EeveeGamerGirl Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omdg he poked my breasts D:
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Violet-Hetalia Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
oh my (death) god. THIS WAS THE BEST STORY EVER you are a fantastic write congratz
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Soul-Skaterz Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can't hold back the tears. The song was beautiful, that I had to re-read this while listening to the song. What you have just written was amazing. I clap for you. :)
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D Thanks. That means a lot
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JeweledArt Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Spaz attack 
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SneakyAlexaBlue24 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student General Artist
First of all I really liked this ^.^
SECONDLY HOW CAN I GET YOUR ICON LIKE OMFG
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
GydroZMaa made it. If you ask her nice, I'm sure she'll let you use it ^_^
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SneakyAlexaBlue24 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student General Artist
*^* thank you!
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AnahiSleepingItaly Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Song time with Kid , and the special today is.....Greensleeves!
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TheDarkPhoenixQueen Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I fangirled sooooooooooo much from start to finish. And when he sang that song.....I think I've fainted. (i feel a poem coming on)

'Oh Kid-sama, Kid-sama; Wherefore art thou, my precious Kid-sama? Your very presence I now seek, appear now to a girl oh so meek. For your every word she shall thrive, she is now begging for you to arrive. Upon the raven's wing you shall go, until then, my love, I say...Tally-ho!' 
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOw ...
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TheDarkPhoenixQueen Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have no idea. o.0 It just came to me.
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SoulEaterGirl238 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist

UH OH, A WILD BLACKSTAR APPEARED OUT OF THE BUSHES! KID USED DEATH CHASE! WILD BLACKSTAR FLED!


XD see what I did there? :iconlaughingplz:


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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD Gotta chase 'em all
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Marceline-9 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*screaming intensifies*

BLACKSTAR WHY



I love Greensleeves btw :D
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asiabunny12 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
he sang crying my eyes out 
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um, I kind of am in love with Kid. oh no what did I just say?
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Ciel-phantomhoof Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
I love your stories they are not half bad
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay! :D
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landra15 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Love this. Great job.^_^

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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. Love your icon, by the way :D
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landra15 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem. The icon's not mine, but thanks.^_^
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's still awesome. I rarely see Yu-Gi-Oh icons :D
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Stary-Warrior Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
figures black star would be the one to mess kid up during his song... :sigh: but i loved the story
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YEah XD
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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rainbowisnotaflower Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
God damnit Black Star. ;-; that was supposed to be a beautiful moment.
XD still loved it
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bettyq2727 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist

..... im not sure who he is.....I just heard of the name from my friend so I read this....I think im going to watch the anime.....

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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You should. It's very good
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bettyq2727 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:3 ok btw I love your icon
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :D
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bettyq2727 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np
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Bad--Wolf--Bay Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Lol, cockblocked by Black Star xD
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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