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Alfred walked down the street toward his home, where his beloved [Name] and son Connor were waiting for him. He had been away for almost a year, fighting for the country he held so dear to his heart, America and he had only just returned. He was excited to see his family again after so long, so he wanted to surprise them. He took a deep breath as he stood on the porch. He was a little worried about how [Name] was going to react. He didn't know if she was going to go crazy and yell at him for not calling first, or if she was going to become a sobbing mess in his arms. Then there was his son, Connor ... how was he going to react?
"Well ... here goes nothing" He said, ringing the doorbell
He waited patiently as he heard Connor becoming excited about someone being at the door ... when he heard Connor keep saying "Is it the Postman?", he couldn't help but smile. The door opened and, to Alfred's surprise, Arthur was standing there. Arthur was stunned by Alfred's surprise visit
"Wh-what the bloody hell are you doing here?" Arthur asked, his voice almost a whisper
"I came home early, bro. I wanted to surprise you all" Alfred chuckled
Arthur started to tear up and he hugged Alfred tightly, as if he had no intention of letting go again
"B-Bastard ... Bastard ..."
"Does that mean you missed me?" Alfred chuckled
"Sh-shut up!"
Arthur was too proud to admit it, but it was obvious he had missed the American idiot. Alfred hugged the now blubbering Brit and let out a chuckle
"Hey, don't cry. You'll get me going, man" Alfred said
"DADDY!"
Alfred looked up and saw his little boy, no older than six, at the other end of the hall
"Hey, champ!" Alfred said, letting go of Arthur
Arthur backed away so Connor could run up to his father. Alfred knelt down, caught him and hugged him tightly
"Daddy, you're home!" Connor said, full of joy
"Yeah, I'm home ..." Alfred said, holding back the tears
It had almost been a year since he held his son in his arms ... and it was a wonderful feeling to be reunited with him after so long
"How are you doing, champ?" Alfred asked
"I'm ok, Daddy" Connor said, grinning like a Cheshire Cat
"Where's your mother?" Alfred asked
"She's out shopping, Daddy. She got Uncle Arthur to look after me" Connor said
"Well then, Mommy's going to have a wonderful surprise when she gets home, huh?" Alfred chuckled

-Later, that afternoon-

Alfred remained in his hiding spot as [Name] came home. He resisted the urge to run to her and hold her in his arms again
"[Name] looks just as beautiful as the day I left" He thought to himself with a smile
"Hello, Connor! Were you good for Arthur?" He heard [Name] ask
"Yes, Mummy" Connor replied
Alfred knew that Connor was going to find it difficult to keep Alfred's return a surprise. Arthur was pretty good at keeping his excitement under control, but Alfred knew that he wanted to tell [Name] that Alfred was home just as much as Connor did
"What's the big grins about?" [Name] laughed
Alfred ventured out of his hiding place and stood behind her with his trademark goofball grin as his son and Arthur looked at him
"Look behind you and see for yourself" Arthur said
[Name] turned around, with a puzzled look on her face which quickly turned to surprised and within seconds she was squealing and trying tears of joy
"I'm home, baby!" Alfred said, laughing
[Name] hugged him, crying into his chest. Connor hugged Alfred's leg and Arthur just gave him a slight nod, obviously embarrassed about his earlier behaviour
"I can't believe it ..." [Name] sobbed
Alfred chuckled, patting his beloved wife's back
"Hey, what are you crying about?" He asked
"I'm ... I'm just so happy!" She wailed, clinging to him tighter
Alfred smiled, knowing that tonight ... for the first time in almost a year, he would sleep beside [Name]. And he wouldn't trade that for anything in the world ...

The End
This is a One-Shot

Caution : May be very sappy/fluffy

America ("Alfred") & England ("Arthur") (c) Hetalia
Story (c) Me, SwiftNinja91
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MosdrasTheLight Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
My feeeels.
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Blackdragon1999 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks to you I'm a blubbering idiot……… and I love it <3
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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KimiVargas1314 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*floods my room with tears of joy*
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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Random-Yeah-HCM Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is it bad that I was hoping this woud be angsty and reader would die on the way home? I'm a terrible person.... Goood story either way though.
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cookiehades Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
Make that two terrible people...
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Random-Yeah-HCM Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahaha. At least we aren't alone.
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cookiehades Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
:D
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angelstien10 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconawwwplz: awwwwww
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Starrykitties Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Why Connor? Every American man wants to name their son Connor...why the Hell is that?
Anyways Great story!
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
In this case, it was a reference to Assassin's Creed III, which my brother was playing at the time when I wrote this
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Starrykitties Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
*gay gasp* I know that guy.
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm not sure how many people like that guy
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ArtemisWest Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
My boyfriend's uncle's name is Arthur.. well, he has a lot of uncles and honorary family.
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jjgirl99 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my frisking god. My little brothers name is Connor and he is 6. Hirt sheet 0_0
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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jjgirl99 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
im serious! he is standin right next to me trying to hack my ipod as im typing this!
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DigiOtaku123 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz: IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL!
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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Ccizvamp15 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
tears of joy
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^_^
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lil-fanfic-girl Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
i am crying T-T
OMG this is so beautiful.
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I sobbed a little... Just saying these are the best kinds of stories and you wrote a good one!
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks ^_^
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^
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americangirl122 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student Artist
Im fricking crying !!!! TWT
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
AWW SO MUCH LUFFYNESS!!! :iconitssofluffyplz:
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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eionus2 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
CUUUUUTE
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pokemontime123 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i almost cried in the middle of this with joy
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug:
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pokemontime123 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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kanagirl Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
this just so cute and fluffy. :D
and happy birthday, America.
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^_^
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is the sweetest and cutest thing I've read on here...I kinda wanna cry now...
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww ... :hug:
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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otaku-wolfs-xD Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
TTwTT awwww so sweet~
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^_^
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darksniper101 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student Writer
My brother did something like this when he came home except he got greeted with our dogs and then our mom freaked out.... I on the other hand hugged him and then punched him in the arm telling him he should have messaged me and then I hugged him some more
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww :hug:
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darksniper101 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Student Writer
Yup ^^
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minchen0897 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
this was really sweet!
I like it^^
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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Roxasluvor Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
that was the sweetest thing i ever read :')
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SwiftNinja91 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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darkmisa-misa Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh the sappyness. ^__^
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